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When I close my eyes, I see only you,
When I open them, you're there too.

Like a meteor shooting across the sky,
your beautiful light blinded my eyes.

Then when you disappeared, everything went black,
I wanted nothing more than to bring you back.

I felt numb and wanted to succumb to the darkness.
But, I remembered you and came back into the brightness.

What I'm saying is very true,
I love you Jesse as you love me too.
I thought of this entire poem myself when I thought idly about the episode of YGO GX I saw. Jaden was all emo after losing Jesse and it made me think about this poem. :heart: And it took a day plus some more time allotted to actually write it. :D Seriously, it was a bitch trying to get everything to rhyme... :frustrated:

A sad attempt really...^^;

Anyway, I didn't find out about Jesse's original Japanese name until a few weeks ago so... sorry about using 'Jesse' everyone. ^^; I freely switch between the English and Japanese names in YGO frequently btw... ^^;

Hope everyone likes my poem. :D


Yu-Gi-Oh! GX (c) Kazuki Takahashi

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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Student Filmographer
I want to try and say this to you, I know How that feels, I wrote 2 poems last night, I call it "Emoetry" I thank my lucky stars that one of my fave TNA Superstars writes stuff like that in his own free time, I learned a lot from his poetry, and My poetry are all on sadness, family, friendship and love, in sonnets or odes or haiku
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:iconkaishiru:
Kaishiru Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh wow. ^^ I bet your poems are way better than what I wrote here. ^^; I bet they're just lovely...:iconloveloveplz:
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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Student Filmographer
you betcha! I want you to add me to your watch list and read, fav and comment the poetry and fanfiction I do! I have some hand drawn pics in there too!
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:iconkaishiru:
Kaishiru Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, I shall. :D
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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Student Filmographer
take this advise, and swear to god that you won't regret this!
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:iconkaishiru:
Kaishiru Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. :D I will not regret it. ^^
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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Student Filmographer
cool!
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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Student Filmographer
Add me to your deviantWatch, and look up my gallery, and see for yourself. I have 2 new new ones, but they are not up yet, I will have them up soon! "Leave The Memories Alone" and "Memories are Made of this" are the new poems that I have to put up! I almost cried when I wrote them, they are about my Long departed Uncle James. most of my poem titles have a song title reference vibe to them, maybe the next one I write would be "What Hurts the most"
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:iconkaishiru:
Kaishiru Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alright. ^^ I'll add you and check it out. :D
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:icongunbladechick101:
gunbladechick101 Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Student Filmographer
thanks!
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